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Sunday, September 16, 2007

Feel........


honour is what i'm try to achieves,
hopes when theres is no hopes,
love when we want to share with someone,
care about someone that we love,
hate when our love were fooled by the one we loved,
desire to loved someone and to be loved by someone,
sick of troublesome,
weak when feel useless,
incomplete when something that can't be done

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

actually, i dont understand what that poem say, but i think the poem is about love. in my opinion this poem is very good to know about our feeling in ourselves, but if someone read that poem, they should know their feeling about someone or something...so the poetry must be edit and give more effect when someone missuse their feel

Anonymous said...

actually, i dont understand what that poem say, but i think the poem is about love. in my opinion this poem is very good to know about our feeling in ourselves, but if someone read that poem, they should know their feeling about someone or something...so the poetry must be edit and give more effect when someone missuse their feel